Here's the first chapter of a new one. I hope you guys like it.
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Quarterback
Keeper, Part 1
C.
Charlie - cosmic709@yahoo.com
cceroticstories.blogspot.com
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Tom
Johnson walked out of his biology class, relieved to be finished with
another day of school. They’d only been at it for a week, but
between his social life, football practice, and the pressures of
being a senior, he was exhausted. He moved through the hallway,
watching the sea of people part before him. He’d waited for this
moment for three years. He was a senior, he was the starting
quarterback, and he was the undisputed king of his high-school.
A
natural leader, Tom was the kind of guy that other people liked to
follow. He had a relaxed, self-effacing personality, and a rugged,
handsome demeanor. The girls stared at him slack-jawed, and his
buddies envied him. Yet it had never gone to his head. He wasn’t
popular because he was pretty; he was popular because people liked
him.
He
walked to his locker with a pack of friends in tow. They jostled each
other, getting pumped up before practice. When he arrived the guy who
had the locker next to his was standing in his way.
Tom
had taken a class or two with Nick, but they'd never interacted until
they became locker neighbors. Quiet and shy, Nick was a nobody, a
literal non-entity in the school. Tom said hi to him in the mornings,
but the conversation didn't go farther than that. He could tell that
Nick was intimidated by him, so he tried to give him the space he
needed.
His
friends, however, couldn't resist hassling the kid. Nick was smaller,
thinner, and a little feminine. The pack had seized on his
vulnerability, and the ribbing was nearly constant. Tom didn't know
how to handle it. He wanted to tell his friends to shut up. On the
other hand, he didn’t want the guys to turn on him. As his friends
amped up the brutality of their insults, the pressure to join in on
the taunting grew. In the end, the desire to impress the pack won
out.
“Out
of my way, fag.” Tom said as he shoved Nick.
He’d
heard his friends say it before. When Nick got flustered and blushed
in the mornings, he’d thought, ‘this guy’s a fag.’ But he’d
never said it. As the words rolled off his tongue he instantly
regretted it. He had no idea that he could hit a guy that hard.
Nick
stumbled over his stuff, slammed his locker door, and quickly ran
off. Tom’s buddies laughed and moved on to the next joke. Tom
shoved some books into his locker, telling the guys he was going to
study for half-an hour before football practice. The pack broke up,
and Tom was alone. His face burned red and his heart thumped in his
chest.
Suddenly
someone grabbed him by the collar. He was pulled around the corner
and into the men's room. When he turned around one of the assistant
football coaches stood in front of him. Coach Miller was about an
inch shorter than Tom and after a summer of lifting heavy Tom could
have taken him. However, he naturally deferred to authority figures
and respected his coaches. He took a step back and relaxed.
He
straightened his shirt as the coach boomed, “What the fuck was that
about?”
Tom
stared at him blankly.
“Did
I hear you call that kid a fag?” he yelled. Miller stepped toward
him. Though the coach had never gotten physical with a player, his
aggression unnerved Tom.
“I
. . . uh . . . yeah I did coach,” Tom stammered as he looked down
at the floor.
“Do
you have any idea how much trouble you can get into for shit like
that? You’d be off the team. Suspended. The end.” Miller said.
The anger had left his voice.
“I
don’t know why I said it.” Tom said. “Honestly, I’m not like
that Coach.”
“You
were trying to impress your idiot friends.” The coach stepped
toward him again and looked him in the eyes. “You’ve got pretty
much everything going for you. You’re damn good looking, you’re
athletic, not stupid, and a natural leader. It’s time for you to
step up and be a man. You’ve got to set the tone with those guys.
They follow you. Don’t forget it.”
“I
know.” Tom said. He felt like he was getting yelled at by his dad.
The shame and disappointment were worse than the fear of punishment.
“I’ll tell him I’m sorry. Next time I see him.”
“Do
it today. OK?” the coach said. “The last thing that kid needs
right now is to get harassed by a guy like you. He probably looks up
to you. Try to be the man he imagines you to be.”
Miller
left without saying another word. Tom felt like an idiot. He stood in
the bathroom for a solid ten minutes and set his mind on putting
things right with Nick. The coach was right. He was too good for this
kind of bullshit. It was time for him to step up.
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* * * *
Nick
Walsh sped home after school, close to tears. His neck was hot and
burning, and his chest hurt. He’d been called a fag before, and it
had never bothered him all that much. But when Tom Johnson said it,
it cut him to the core. He was crushed.
Tom
had been nice to him, friendly even, and it had seemed too good to be
true. Over the week, he’d convinced himself that Tom was better
than he'd thought a guy like that could be. He’d even started to
entertain the idea that Tom might like him. It was a fantasy, but
there was some basis in reality.
Tom
was every gay boy’s wet dream come true. Tall with broad shoulders,
his body was wrapped in muscle. His dark blond hair was cut short,
his jaw square, his eyes a piercing brown. Popular and athletic, he
had a personality to go with his looks. He’d even started to send
Nick a little wave when they passed in the hallways.
And
then . . . “out of my way fag.”
The
whole fantasy collapsed. Tom was just another asshole jock. He would
never like Nick, not as a friend, and certainly not in the way that
Nick wanted to be liked.
He
was upstairs changing his clothes when he heard the doorbell ring. He
opened the front door, and Tom Johnson stood in front of him. Nick
was a respectable height and weight, 5'10" and a defined 160
lbs, but he felt dwarfed by Tom. Tom wore a sleeveless white t-shirt
and gray cotton shorts that clung to his quads. He ran a hand through
his hair and asked if he could come in.
Nick
nodded and stepped aside, dumbstruck. Tom walked into the living room
and sat down on the couch. He spread his legs open and Nick could see
the long bulge of his dick through his shorts.
Nick
tried not to stare as he sat down. In his head, he yelled at himself
for not saying anything. Why couldn't he say anything?
"Listen,
today when I said, uh . . . when I called you a, uh . . . fag, I
shouldn't have said that. I don't know why I did. I guess I was just
trying to impress my friends. I'm sorry."
The
words tumbled out of Tom's mouth all at once, and Nick could see that
he meant them. He stared at Tom's gorgeous face. The fact that this
hunk was so torn up about calling a guy a name made him even more
attractive. His fantasy, momentarily sullied, was back and stronger
than ever.
"The
pack is going to leave you alone too. I'm not going to let them treat
you that way anymore." Tom went on, hoping for some response.
"Thanks."
Nick said softly, "This is, uh, really cool of you Tom."
"Hey,
bud, I don't know if you're into it, but I've got some weed in my
car if you want to toke up." Tom said with a grin. "I mean,
if we're going to spend the year as neighbors, we should get to know
each other, right?"
"Seriously?"
Nick said, "Yeah, that'd be great."
Soon
they were in the backyard smoking. They lay out on benches, taking in
the last rays of the summer sun. They didn't talk about anything.
Nick was too nervous to speak and was terrified that he would ruin
everything. Tom enjoyed the silence. It was a welcome reprieve from
the constant chatter of his friends. The sun was hot on his skin, and
he stripped off his shirt without much thought. Nick's eyes widened
in awe of the body that was revealed.
It
had been obvious that Tom was muscular, but Nick had no idea that the
guy was ripped to shreds. Every muscle in his torso rippled as he
settled back onto the bench. His pecs were two huge slabs with
perfect, quarter-sized nipples on top of them. Nick stole glances
whenever he could, making a point of not staring.
After
another five minutes, Tom stirred, "Man, I'm parched. You mind
if I get a glass of water?"
Nick
got up, and Tom followed him into the house. He filled a glass and
handed it to Tom, who gulped it down. His huge Adams apple bounced as
he swallowed. Nick's eyes wandered down Tom's torso to the perfect V
that framed his groin. A patch of dark hair, trimmed close to the
skin, trailed down into his shorts above a magnificent bulge.
Nick
didn't realize he was staring until Tom said, "What's up man?"
Nick
blushed and stepped backward. "Nothing." He stuttered.
Tom
sat down on a stool. "You're gay, aren't you?"
Nick
muttered something and looked away.
"Sorry,
man," Tom said quickly, "That was kind of personal. You
just seem really thrown off whenever you're around me."
"Yeah,
I'm gay." Nick said. It was the first time he'd told anyone.
Then he added quickly, without thinking, "And you're, like,
really hot."
Nick
blushed and looked away, beating himself up inside. Why the fuck did
he say that? First he tells the guy he's gay. Then he tells him he's
hot. What the fuck was that about?
"I'm
just a guy." Tom said, ignoring the remark, "You don't have
to be intimidated."
Nick
continued to stare at the floor.
"It's
ok if you look at my body, man. I'm not going to freak out or
anything." Tom said. "Maybe then you wouldn't be so shy
around me. If you just took it all in, you could relax a little."
Nick
looked up. He stared at Tom's chest, and then briefly looked up at
his face. Tom grinned, and Nick's heart melted. Why did this guy have
to be so hot and so nice to him at the same time? His dick was
throbbing, and he needed a minute to get his mind together. His
thoughts were cloudy from the weed. He stepped back and pretended
like he needed more water.
Tom
read the move and almost instinctively grabbed Nick by the wrist. He
slowly moved Nick's hand to his chest and placed the open palm
against his skin. Nick didn't try to pull away.
Tom
had no idea why he had reached out for Nick, and his head was
spinning. He knew that Nick had a crush on him and that he was giving
him what he desired, but it felt like a game. He was teasing Nick.
Making him think he could get something that Tom wouldn't give.
Tom
broke the silence. "Have you ever touched a guy like this
before?"
Nick
shook his head no.
"It's
ok." Tom said as he let go of Nick's wrist.
Nick
moved his hand across the muscular chest. The skin was a little
sweaty, and his fingers slid around Tom's nipples. The touch suddenly
turned erotic, and Tom stiffened up. Nick panicked and pulled his
hand away.
Something
in Tom wanted to give Nick the chance to explore his sexuality. He
kept hearing the coach's voice telling him to be the man Nick
imagined him to be, and letting a guy touch his chest wasn't too
weird. On a deeper, visceral level, the contact with his nipples had
woken up his lizard brain. It sensed an opportunity for sex; a chance
to plant his seed. Tom wasn't cognizant of the desire, but he could
feel his body reaching out and trying to pull Nick in.
He
grabbed Nick's hand again and placed it on his stomach. He’d worked
hard all summer, cutting his calories like a freak to get a rippling
six pack. He was proud of his washboard abs, and would miss them once
he bulked up for football. Nick gazed at his muscles, admiring his
frame strength and size. Without thinking Tom reached over and put a
hand on Nick’s chest, feeling his body through his shirt.
“You
should work out, man. You’ve got a good build.” Tom said. He
moved his hand to Nick’s stomach. “You’d put on muscle in no
time.”
“You
think?” Nick said through heavy breaths.
“Yeah,
man. You should start working out with the guys.”
The
rational part of Tom’s brain was back in control. This was how he
would make things up to Nick. He would teach him how to lift,
introduce him to the dudes at the gym, and let him hang around with
the pack. Nick would feel better about himself, and he would look
better for helping him. It was a win-win.
“That’d
be so cool.” Nick said.
Tom
stood and took a drink of water, letting Nick's hand fall away from
his body. They awkwardly stood in silence for half a minute, and Nick
started to worry that he would blow his one chance at getting into
Tom’s pants. He had a jock standing in his kitchen who had stripped
down and let him feel his body. Whatever was going on, whether it was
the weed or something else, he could sense that Tom's guard was down.
He mustered his courage and reached out toward Tom’s stomach.
As
soon as Nick made contact Tom recoiled from the touch. Nick looked at
him, terrified. It took a second, but then he smiled. He squared his
shoulders and said, “It’s ok.” This time trying to reassure
himself as much as Nick
Nick
rubbed his hands over Tom’s abs, only once glancing up into his
eyes. Tom look vulnerable, yet somehow still in control control.
“I’d
love to have a stomach like this,” Nick said, trying to mask the
touching as admiration rather than a sexual advance.
Tom
didn’t buy it. “How long have you wanted me?”
“I
don’t know, since I saw you.” Nick said. He blushed again.
Tom
felt himself losing control. The hand on his stomach felt amazing. It
was a different kind of touch - not at all like a girl’s. Nick’s
hand was rougher, and his attitude bordered on worshipful. Tom had
never had a person so interested in him before. His dick started to
stir. He wanted to impress this guy, to show him how much of a man he
was, to take him, conquer him, and own him.
He
straightened up his back, making his body bigger and more
intimidating. Then he threw back his shoulders, causing his chest to
expand and his abs to contract. He could do whatever he wanted with
Nick, and his dick decided that it wanted more. He grabbed Nick’s
hand by the wrist and pushed it lower. When Nick’s fingers made
contact with the waistband of his shorts, Tom guided them under the
fabric. He let go and felt Nick's fingers move through his pubes.
His
last rational thought was that he shouldn’t take advantage of Nick.
Whatever happened between them today was the most there could ever
be. He had no intention of continuing things outside of the strange
circumstances of that afternoon. He knew that he was leading Nick on,
creating expectations that couldn’t be fulfilled.
Then
Nick’s fingers wrapped around his dick and he stopped thinking.
Nick's
hand passed the head of his cock and grasped his shaft. Tom was hard
as steel, and when he looked forward, Nick’s eyes were in front of
his own. The guy looked terrified and elated at the same time. This
was his first sexual experience, Tom remembered. Until ten minutes
ago, he’d never even touched a guy. On top of that, Tom was the man
of his dreams. He untied the drawstring that held his shorts up and
let them slide down. Then he stepped out of the flimsy fabric. Nick
kept his hand on his dick the whole time. Tom didn’t need to think
about what came next. He had enough experience to know how to move
things along.
He
put a hand on Nick’s shoulder and gently pushed him downward. He
was amazed how quickly Nick complied and dropped to his knees. No
resistance, no second thoughts. The heat rising from Tom’s groin
called to him and suddenly he was confronted by Tom’s dick. Nine
inches of uncut, veiny manhood shot out in front of him. He stared at
it in awe, practically dumbstruck by the massive dick. Tom was truly
the whole package.
If
you had asked Tom that morning about getting sucked off by a guy, he
would have told you that he would never do it. Now, horned up by the
situation and Nick's devotional attitude, he realized that he wasn't
too hung up on who sucked his dick as long as he got his nut. He
smiled at Nick, who looked scared.
"Just
explore." Tom said as he leaned back against the counter.
Nick
put his hands on Tom's thighs and was immediately surprised at their
hardness and their warmth. Tom's muscles twitched under his tight
skin. Knowing that this wasn't the kind of exploration that Tom
expected, he brought his lips to the head of Tom's cock.
He
let it slip into his mouth. It was the first dick he had ever sucked,
and he was confronted by the taste, smell, and heat of Tom's manhood.
The time spend outside had created a coating of salty sweat, and
warm, musky air rose up from between his legs. Nick grabbed onto
Tom's balls. They were big and heavy in his hand. Tom's sack felt
like silk as his nuts rolled between Nick's fingers.
The
head of Tom's dick still in his mouth, Nick placed his hands on Tom's
ass, moving them down the back of the jock's legs. As he grabbed onto
Tom's calves, Tom flexed and pushed forward. His dick pushed deeper
into Nick's mouth. Nick sucked eagerly on the head of Toms' dick,
bobbing up and down while his hands rubbed his calves.
Tom
looked down at him. "Everything you imagined?"
"Better."
"You're
a natural." Tom said, "It feels good."
Tom's
big hand moved across Nick's neck and up into his hair, sending a
shiver down Nick's spine. He played with the longish brown hair and
caressed his scalp. Nick turned into putty under the gentle
maneuvering, and slowly Tom moved his mouth from the tip of his dick
onto his shaft. Nick allowed Tom to take control. He kissed his way
down the shaft and then tongued the thick pubes at the root of Tom's
massive cock.
The
pressure on the back of his head didn't let up. Tom pushed him
further downward. As Nick descended into Tom's junk, he felt things
getting hotter and moister. He breathed in deeply. Tom smelled like a
man. It was a moment of confirmation for him. Only a gay guy could
love that smell, and he definitely loved it.
Tom
pushed him into his nuts. They were the biggest pair of testicles
Nick had ever seen, either in the locker-room or in porn. They hung
low from Tom's body and were much larger than they had felt in his
hand. They looked like a pair of eggs, swinging between his legs.
Nick palmed them and kissed one of the orbs before looking up at Tom.
"Fucking
wild, huh?" Tom grinned, "That's our dirty family secret."
Nick
kept staring. They were larger than life.
"Kiss
them again." Tom hissed.
Tom
leaned back against the counter and opened his legs. Not only were
his nuts huge, they were the most sensitive part of his body. Nothing
made him happier than a warm, wet mouth sucking on his baby-makers. A
dude’s nuts were his manhood - that’s where it all came from -
and showing them some appreciation was synonymous in Tom's mind with
showing him the respect he deserved. Girls always avoided his nuts.
They were either grossed out by their size or turned off by sucking
on a man’s sack. Tom had Nick completely under his spell, and he
was determined to get a good ball job out of the encounter.
Nick
sucked a nut into his mouth and looked up at Tom. His huge cock stood
above him, the foreskin rolled back around the head. Tom’s perfect
body lay beyond. It was an over whelming position to be in. A stud
staring down at him, a cock in his face, muscular thighs on either
side, and the smell and heat of Tom’s body. He went a little crazy
as he dove into the jock’s junk. Tom groaned loudly.
“Yes.”
he moaned, “Fuck yes.”
Tom’s
grabbed Nick’s hair and began to move Nick’s head around his
sack. Nick sucked and licked while Tom directed his mouth from left
to right, under his nuts and above them, into the crease between his
legs and then back to his junk. Nick was slobbering all over him, and
as his head got pushed around, his own saliva left a shiny film on
his face.
“Oh
fuck yeah,” Tom groaned. He looked down at Nick, who was staring
right back at him. “You’re doing good, man. I could stand here
forever.”
“This
is so fucking hot,” Nick said as he tongued Tom's dick.
Tom
moved his hand to his dick. As Nick sucked on his balls, he rubbed
the head of his cock through Nick’s hair. He was leaking like a
faucet now, and a steady stream of precum spilled out onto Nick’s
scalp. It was dirty, Tom thought. It didn’t seem right to ooze dog
water onto someone without them knowing. Seeing the slick mess grow
fueled his frenzy, and as Nick’s hair rubbed his glans, he realized
that he was getting close to cumming.
Tom
leaned forward and pushed his body down against Nick’s face.
Surprisingly, Nick pushed back against him. Tom ground his junk into
the eager mouth, while he jerked his cock. His mind was completely
blank. He was just trying to get off.
Nick
sensed that Tom was on the edge and reached into his pants for his
dick. He was so hard and horny that it only took a few pulls for his
orgasm to boil over. His whole body convulsed and his breathing
became ragged. He felt a thick rope of cum race up his shaft and
blast into his jeans. Five more volleys of seed followed, and he felt
each one. It was the wildest, most intense orgasm of his life. The
volume of cum filled his briefs and covered his hand. His dreams and
fantasies had come true - he actually had his mouth on Tom Johnson’s
nuts. He savored every twitch and wave of pleasure.
Tom
watched Nick’s body shake. He could tell that Nick was cumming
because he wasn’t even sucking his nuts any more. Instead, he was
just breathing hard against his sack. Alternating blasts of hot,
moist breath and cool air tingled across the skin of his scrotum.
What
turned him on even more was the fact that Nick was willing to cum
like that. Face jammed between his legs, wholly caught up in the act
of servicing him, so hot that he blew his load in his pants. It was
an incredible power trip, and he felt strong and powerful. No one had
ever made their own sexual enjoyment about him before.
“I’m
ready,” Tom said out loud. ‘“Fuck, I’m going to cum.”
Without
a second thought, Nick moved his mouth to the head of Tom’s dick.
Tom looked down at him, surprised that Nick was actually trying to
catch his cum in his mouth. This, again, was something that girls
never, ever wanted to do.
“You
want it?” Tom asked. His face was sweaty and he was all smiles. He
didn’t wait for Nick to respond. “Yeah you do.” He moved his
hand along the side of Nick’s face and then slipped a finger into
his mouth. Nick immediately sucked down on it.
“Yeah,
you’re going to get a big load of my cum. Get ready.”
Nick
mumbled something as Tom removed his finger and slipped the tip of
his dick between Nick’s lips. He let himself go and began to blast
his load into Nick’s mouth.
Nick
had tasted his own cum before, but the taste of Tom’s was
different, and the way it just flooded his mouth was intense. It
poured out onto his tongue in salty, thick globs. Nick swished it
around, breaking it up as he continued to tongue Tom’s glans. Tom
had one hand on his dick and one on Nick’s head, and he held both
steady as he unloaded. Even if Nick had wanted to pull away, he
wouldn’t have been able to.
When
Nick glanced upward, he was amazed. Tom’s whole body contracted.
The muscles of his chest bulged. His abs were tight and rigid. Then
his dick would throb and dump another thick glob of semen into his
mouth. This happened at least five times before Tom’s hips stopped
moving and his cock ran dry. He continued to shudder, and his rod
stayed rock hard in Nick’s mouth.
Tom
let out a loud sigh and bent backward. He shook the tension out of
his muscles and then stepped away from Nick. His dick began to
soften, and he pulled his shorts back on. Nick stared at him,
questioning whether or not he was dreaming. Tom's eyes moved down
Nick's body and noticed the massive wet spot in Nick's shorts. It
looked like Nick had pissed his pants.
"Jesus,
bro, is that all cum?" he asked.
Nick
blushed and looked down at himself. "Yeah," he said, "I'm
kind of a shooter."
"You
better keep that dick away from a pussy, cause you'll knock a chick
up in a second."
Nick
smiled. "I don't think that's going to happen."
Tom
finished the glass of water that sat on the counter before pulling on
his clothes. "I gotta get going." There was a moment of
awkward silence. Neither guy knew what to do next. "I guess I
should say thanks." Tom said.
"I'm
the one who should be saying thanks." Nick said.
"Well,
uh, I don't think I need to say it, but . . ."
"Don't
worry," Nick said. "I'm not going to tell anyone."
"Well,
uh, see you tomorrow then." Tom said as he turned to leave.
Nick
stood in the middle of the room, breathing in the last fumes of their
coupling. Post orgasm fear and insecurity had returned. He had no
idea how Tom, Mr Straight Jock, would cope with the fact that he'd
just let Nick blow him. Nick knew not to expect much. Hopefully, Tom
wouldn't start ignoring him.
He
stood up and did a quick scan of the kitchen. He didn't want his
parents to come home and find a splash of cum somewhere. He cracked a
window to air the room out. Then he went up to his bedroom, lubed his
cock, closed his eyes, and relived it all.
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Thanks
for reading, and I hope you liked it. Charlie –
cosmic709@yahoo.com.
Intrigued by the opener Charlie, lots of ways this could go. Sexual power over someone is truly intoxicating and something you can't get enough of once you realise you enjoy it. Looking forward to the next chapter to see how things go but I'm hoping Tom isn't as straight as he thinks he is!
ReplyDeleteGood job as always Charlie.
It will be interesting to see if this ends up being a "love" story or a "dominance" story. I'm hoping that it's an exploration love story for both the characters.
ReplyDeleteAgreed! I have a feeling he will mix in the love/dominance in!
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I hope it's a dominance story! Fuck yeah!
ReplyDeleteyou should just write full time!
ReplyDeleteSeriously, I like the story…or at least the beginning. I'm sure, no matter how you write it, I will end up loving the story! You just have that ability to make it happen. When I first read the dad story, I wasn't too sure about it, but as always, you pull through. Now, I love it! So, yes, yes, and yes! Keep it coming with this story!
hey it's me again…original poster.
DeleteJust wondering if you could work in some angles of jealousy in with your stories. I find it super hot when a dominant/alpha gets jealous… just the subtle, hard stares, or the feeling of tension between conversation can be sexy! haha just a thought. I think you've done this with some stories/chapters.
anyway, great job as usual!
Keep it up!
One more thing….hahah
DeleteI guess you can tell I have nothing to do, huh?
At first, I was leaning more towards a dominance story, but I'm leaning more towards a story of seduction, romance, maybe?? but I'm sure you will find a way to throw some dominant elements in at a point?
Ok i'm done for real this time…I guess I'll go re-read some of your stories until I fall asleep!
Hot story, like how it has some domination but still feels somewhat mutual. keep going
ReplyDeleteGlad you guys like it. There will definitely be more plot in this story, but I'll try to keep the sex hot.
ReplyDeleteGreat story cant wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteIncredible! I love ALL your stories, you should publish a book, believe me friend you will be famous.
ReplyDeleteLove your hot dominant studs! Where can I meet one? lol
ReplyDeleteOH SHIT I LOVE THIS !!! this is soo unlike your usual beginings !!! i can see the improvement !!! i already looove the characters personalities !!
ReplyDeleteAnd also, i'll add myself to what the Anon before suggested about the jealousy bits !! its could be truely sexy to see the alpha boy getting suddenly jealous !!
and i also love the idea of a more seductive story !! the boys trying to resist the temptations (especially Tom!) would be so hot !!!
Of course dominance will always be a must, and btw i love how Tom think of himself around Nick !!! trying to impress, trying to own, because he's unconsciously so into the boy himself !!!
so HELL TO THE YES with this one !!! its already G.R.E.A.T
and am not even surprised !
Wow! talk about synchronicity! Just today before i read the story, I was thinking how hot
Deleteit might be to have an authoritarian plot where the relationship is also romantic.
Seems like other readers are sharing the same thought.
Keep UP the good work
sja33
Hot..can't wait for the next one to see what happens to that cockhungry dad
ReplyDeletereally love the series!! please continue writing!! you inspire me to write!
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work and lets jerk some tears (and other things)!!
xoxo
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